Experiment: who will rewrite whom?
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 8:10 am
This is a text that was written by a person, a content manager, for the ArrowMedia blog - "Promotion of real estate in Telegram channels: how to get real applications from crops." The opponents are Russian-speaking neural networks that imitate texts from the Internet.
First, we tried to generate the full text in the Aisearch neural network, specifying only our title in the source data. It turned out to be quite voluminous:
"Currently, many real estate agencies use Telegram to promote their services. However, not all of them receive real applications from seedings. In order to get the maximum opportunities for real estate sales, you need to follow several rules:
Clearly formulate your goals. You need to determine what kind of real estate you will be promoting, what audience you want to attract, and what competitive advantages you have over other agencies.
Defining quality criteria for applications. It is necessary to philippines mobile database determine which data from applications is most important and how it can be used to optimize sales.
Creating quality ads. It is necessary to create informative and detailed ads that contain all the necessary information about the property.
Optimization of the technical part of the channel. It is necessary to design the channel in such a way that users can easily and quickly find the necessary information about real estate and contact information for contacting you.
Careful monitoring. It is necessary to constantly monitor user activity in your channel and respond to requests in a timely manner, as well as regularly optimize the channel.
By communicating with the user through the channel, the agency gets the opportunity to tell in more detail about its work, services, sales, answer visitors' questions and thereby receive real applications from the sowings. A properly organized Telegram channel is the key to successful real estate promotion."
Great in terms of content, considering that there is not a single keyword at the start except for the title. But, of course, the style is lame: too many repetitions, "watery" phrases and excessive formality.
What if we try a fractional rewrite, in parts.
First, we tried to generate the full text in the Aisearch neural network, specifying only our title in the source data. It turned out to be quite voluminous:
"Currently, many real estate agencies use Telegram to promote their services. However, not all of them receive real applications from seedings. In order to get the maximum opportunities for real estate sales, you need to follow several rules:
Clearly formulate your goals. You need to determine what kind of real estate you will be promoting, what audience you want to attract, and what competitive advantages you have over other agencies.
Defining quality criteria for applications. It is necessary to philippines mobile database determine which data from applications is most important and how it can be used to optimize sales.
Creating quality ads. It is necessary to create informative and detailed ads that contain all the necessary information about the property.
Optimization of the technical part of the channel. It is necessary to design the channel in such a way that users can easily and quickly find the necessary information about real estate and contact information for contacting you.
Careful monitoring. It is necessary to constantly monitor user activity in your channel and respond to requests in a timely manner, as well as regularly optimize the channel.
By communicating with the user through the channel, the agency gets the opportunity to tell in more detail about its work, services, sales, answer visitors' questions and thereby receive real applications from the sowings. A properly organized Telegram channel is the key to successful real estate promotion."
Great in terms of content, considering that there is not a single keyword at the start except for the title. But, of course, the style is lame: too many repetitions, "watery" phrases and excessive formality.
What if we try a fractional rewrite, in parts.